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z.'s avatar

beautifully written, rona aagaya.

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The Archaic Allegory's avatar

thank you Zainab!

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riya's avatar

"ek umr hai jo bitaani hai uses bagair,

aur ek lamha hai jo mujhse guzaara nahi jaata."

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xena upside's avatar

I thimk you are beautiful, and I don't mean physically, I mean universal, exquisite collective of manifold layers that address this realm with your minds eye, a stunning understanding of the world as it is, you are inoffensive and definitely a soul child that can breathe through the complexes without disturbing mother earth, for which your anonymity deserves a molecular star 🌟 burst ever onwards, ❤️

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The Archaic Allegory's avatar

I think this is the best compliment I’ve gotten this year. Thankyou 👾

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Saxxon Creative's avatar

beautiful

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The Archaic Allegory's avatar

Thankyou!

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riya's avatar

beautiful masterpiece

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The Archaic Allegory's avatar

Thankyou Riya!

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riya's avatar

pyaar ka problem kya hai na ki jab tak us mein pagalpan na ho, woh pyaar hi nahi

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xena upside's avatar

I must apologise, I've sent you a really nice message, and I think it's gone to wrong person 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔, it was lovely and very exquisite..... I'll try and retrieve it.. , but I'm not good at technology, and I couldn't repeat my honest entreaty to your life breathing, breathtaking observational and delicate observational delicious mindset delivery..., maybe, this message is better than the missing one, but assured, and rest, anarchic algorithmy apoplectic eclective life drawn selective perspectives and visual information and impact, you are a distant lovely soul ❤️,

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xena upside's avatar

If you mean my compliment to you is the best, that makes a grin on my face, you have stunning Input, could I possibly suggest a you tube video of glendorra, by the most beautiful lady alessis ark, a beautiful innocence a bandstand, amazing lady with her own genuine aspect of, or interpretation of life In her concept, which is the loneliness genius. Bless her and you 🙏

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